Hey, good edits, but please be aware that there is a history page of each page, showing all commits. Would be nice if you include notes on why you manually reverted some of my changes (I thought I argumented them well...) and maybe also notes on your other comments in which you say what you've added and explain why etc.
As for what pieces I removed that you added: For example, simply saying users should follow steps is in my opinion superfluous... See commits on history page for more notes.